Those were the things that turned me off finishing the book but I have two other problems. She is trying not to be seen as suspicious by knowing too much but "lets things slip" by being a know-it-all approximately every 3 pages, and nobody ever lets it slide, always getting suspicious that she has insider information. The main character/dialogue is straight up annoying. For example she meets up with Ryan, her late brother's best friend, who's like an older brother to her (after previously introducing 2 other bff's who will presumably have a role), he off-handedly mentions his little brother Trent, who then shows up professing his undying love for the MC, and will presumably feature more. Characters that are very close to the main character are introduced randomly and not incorporated well. It gets extremely old and even the interactions with the (2 so far) guys that aren't hitting on her are cringeworthy. Literally every guy except her "older brother" hits on the main character, asks her to be his girlfriend, 'hey babies' her, flirts with her, implies other guys are flirting with her, looks at her chest cuz her shirt is ripped, etc. I wanted to like it because it seemed like a low-stakes video game character journey where, by reincarnating, the main character has all the knowledge of the hidden ways to get more power and be a unique class in a vr mmo.
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